My website

[Tony2005]

finally finished - i know its not the best but please have a look and if you have time fill in the feed back form

thanks for any help

http://www.geocities.com/carworks2003/

[j.m@talk]

Slowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :(

[Scavenger7]

page loaded fast for me.. :t

[Tony2005]

slow for me 2 hmmm geocities :@

[Cyan]

on "How Airbags Work - Part 2"

There is a "But with" at the end of the first paragraph, that's it, just "But with" ??

also on the last bullet on the same page

"If your air bag is installed in the seat belt then tilt it downwards toward your chest rather than your head (only applies to cars with adjustable steering wheels.)"

Since when have air bags been installed in seat belts?


on "How Brakes Work - Part 4"

"It is similar to a bicycle brake in how it works."
I suggest revising this line
maybe "It works similarly to a bicycle brake" or "bicycle brakes work in much the same way" or ...

on the same page as "How Brakes Work - Part 4"

the section beginning on "Drum Brakes"

"Below is a picture of a drum brake, as you can see it may look quite confusing and complex but it works in a simple way."
use stronger language and clean it up
"Below is a picture of a drum brake, it may look confusing and complex, but it works logically."
or
"The picture below shows a drum brake. Drum brakes may look cofusing and complex, but it works simply."

[Tony2005]

well spotted thanks :t